Tuesday, 4 October 2011

syg, this is my writing exam syg :)

            I was 20 years old. I'am a simple girl. Friendly, kind and loving. I have a boyfriend. His name is uput. I'm still study at the college. My life is so simple everyday. When i finished class, i go to see him. Everyday we go out, lunch together and he also followed me where i g. He is kind, faithful and cool. He is loving and caring.
 
            One day, he was followed me go to college. I has an appointment with the lecturer. I wanted to send a letter because i want to move out from there because i has a nother request from another college. He drive my car to go the college. His car break down and still at the workshop. When we on the way,he ask some question to me. But at the same time, i have a call. I picked up the call. He silent and hear me. I have a called until we arrived at te college. I go inside the office and do my bussiness. He go find the park to park the car. he was cool when i has a called at the same time i have called. His not mad at me.

            When i finished my bussines, i still with my phone on called with my best friend. I go inside in a car and go to lunch. He drive slowly because he know i don't like his drive faster. Before that, we go to oil station. He want to go the toilet. After that, we continued our way go to lunch. I'm still on called. When arrived at the traffic light, i ending the call. Then he want to ask me that question. When he wanted to asking me, i have a call again and i say sorry to him. He said nevermin because his understand me. We continued our way to lunch.

            We arrived at the place where we want to get lunch like usual. We go out from the car and go inside the restaurant. We seat at the favourite place nearer the wall. Waiter already taked ordered. I'm still on call with my  friend. He was waiting for me ended the called because his wanted to ask the question. Beofre that, he go to nearer shop to buy something hetell me. I seat there waiting him come.

            He already text me about the question. But i still on my called. He go to shop between the restaurant to buy some flower to gave for me. He try to called me but i don't answer because i still on called. he try again until he get it. He called while go to the restaurant to gave me the flower. My favourite flower. When he crossing the road, i saw him accident in front of my eyes. I run fastest as i can go to get him. I was crying adn don't know what to do. He still want  ask that question to me but its too late. He's gone. When i check my cell phone, has a message and missed call. i checked the text, he want to ask me do want marry me and he said he love me so much. It all my fault because i don't care what he want to ask me. It is bad memories i had. If only i had been move careful, that wouldn't have happened.


-The bold sentences is a title.
-Teacher comment : Very good effort! keep it up! :)
my marks is 33/50. heeee.
i love you so muchhhhhhhhhhhhh isteriiiii. mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmuahhhhhhhhhh dahi! i miss you so muchhhh :( huu.

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