Sunday, 30 October 2011

Saturday, 15 October 2011

When i see your smile

  One morning in the Paris, the environtment was peaceful. There were many birds and the sun was beautiful. I woke up at 9 a.m want to go to first registration at the university. I just went there myself. The university was very crowded with students for first registration. I saw many guys with their parenst waiting for the registration to open. I sat at the small chair near the flowers at the garden. I brought my camera to shoot candid pictures around the university. The people were so good, kind adn friendly. iwent to cafe to take my breakfast.

        When i arrived at the cafe, i saw my relatives there. I went to then to say "hi". Then we talked a few minutes. After that, i went to take my breakfast. Many students were with their parents at the cafe. I was alone there sat near the cafe wall. While i ate, one of students were looking for a seart. I offered he to sit with me shared table to take breaksfast. When he finished eating, i asked his name and what course he take. His name is Zamarul and he is from Sabah where i live. So we came from the same place.

        After we finished breaksft, we went to he registration hall. On our way to the hall, i saw one girl smile on me. She smiled so nice and made my heart melt. I just walked to the hall because i don't have time to know her. When my friend and i arrived at the hall, we go to the counter to registered our name. We sat on the chair at the stydents seats beside parents seats. While i sat and talked with Zamarul, i saw the girl again im the hall and she smiled to me. I went to her and say " hello" adn asked her name. I just talked for a few minutes to know her name and what course she take.

        Tomorrow morning, i had a class for the first day. Media class. I went to the calss with Zamarul, we looking for the seat. I saw the girl i meet at the hall registration. Her name is Sonia. She is kind girl, friendly and easy to talk with her. I sat with her to know more about her. Sonia and i study together until the end of class. When classfinished, i inveited her to take lunch at the cafe. We have a ball. After we lunch, i sent her go to the hostel and i brought her to go to see movies and then we go to the rose garden to see and feel the environtment there. I shoot her candid picture at the rose garden. When he sat at the same place, i ask her some question. "Do you have a boyfriend before?" . She answered "not yet". I request her to be she's boyfriend. Then she smiled to me. When she birthday come, i sing a song to her with playing the piano her favousrite song. That day, i was promised to her i want married with her after finished study.

      10 years later, after we graduate. We find a job, buy a new house and a car then we get married. My wife pregnant for the first child. I threat her carefully and spent more time with her. She still looked liked past when were together and fall in love for the first time. We have a ball. My weekends activities is shoot camdid my wife photo when she relaxed on the bed. Her smiled still liked the past its so nice made my heart melt. Futhermore, i bought her go to the rose garden where the first place we go for the first date. When we arrived there, i do the samething waht i do before that. Hoot her candidi photo and made a joke to make she smiled and laugh. I liked looked her smiled and laugh. For the months come, my first child was born on sunday morning . That day i was so happy because i becomed to be a father and had a son. The secong thins made me happy, thah day i s the day where my wife and i  hang out together and the day we falling in love. I'm so happy. Now, i has a family, complete family. Smalled family. I'm so happy for that and thankful to God. Now, my life so happy with my wife and my son.


I Love You So Much Isteriku :)
Please check my writing and give a comment for this writing. Okey syg? :)
Give marks for my writing ok syg :)
I always in love with you wife :)

Tuesday, 4 October 2011

syg, this is my writing exam syg :)

            I was 20 years old. I'am a simple girl. Friendly, kind and loving. I have a boyfriend. His name is uput. I'm still study at the college. My life is so simple everyday. When i finished class, i go to see him. Everyday we go out, lunch together and he also followed me where i g. He is kind, faithful and cool. He is loving and caring.
 
            One day, he was followed me go to college. I has an appointment with the lecturer. I wanted to send a letter because i want to move out from there because i has a nother request from another college. He drive my car to go the college. His car break down and still at the workshop. When we on the way,he ask some question to me. But at the same time, i have a call. I picked up the call. He silent and hear me. I have a called until we arrived at te college. I go inside the office and do my bussiness. He go find the park to park the car. he was cool when i has a called at the same time i have called. His not mad at me.

            When i finished my bussines, i still with my phone on called with my best friend. I go inside in a car and go to lunch. He drive slowly because he know i don't like his drive faster. Before that, we go to oil station. He want to go the toilet. After that, we continued our way go to lunch. I'm still on called. When arrived at the traffic light, i ending the call. Then he want to ask me that question. When he wanted to asking me, i have a call again and i say sorry to him. He said nevermin because his understand me. We continued our way to lunch.

            We arrived at the place where we want to get lunch like usual. We go out from the car and go inside the restaurant. We seat at the favourite place nearer the wall. Waiter already taked ordered. I'm still on call with my  friend. He was waiting for me ended the called because his wanted to ask the question. Beofre that, he go to nearer shop to buy something hetell me. I seat there waiting him come.

            He already text me about the question. But i still on my called. He go to shop between the restaurant to buy some flower to gave for me. He try to called me but i don't answer because i still on called. he try again until he get it. He called while go to the restaurant to gave me the flower. My favourite flower. When he crossing the road, i saw him accident in front of my eyes. I run fastest as i can go to get him. I was crying adn don't know what to do. He still want  ask that question to me but its too late. He's gone. When i check my cell phone, has a message and missed call. i checked the text, he want to ask me do want marry me and he said he love me so much. It all my fault because i don't care what he want to ask me. It is bad memories i had. If only i had been move careful, that wouldn't have happened.


-The bold sentences is a title.
-Teacher comment : Very good effort! keep it up! :)
my marks is 33/50. heeee.
i love you so muchhhhhhhhhhhhh isteriiiii. mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmuahhhhhhhhhh dahi! i miss you so muchhhh :( huu.

Monday, 3 October 2011

syg, this i my writing :)

i do this because i don't want you sad because i don't bring my exam english paper and i want you read all my fault. I hope you understand what i write this. I love you so muchhh wife :) 

        Theres have two couples live at the same place. They don't know each other and never see before this. The boy name is Boboy and that girl is Gigurl. The boy are young than the girl. He like the girl before this, but he don't know how to say to her and see her. Boboy always tried he best to do something to meet the Gigurl. He very like to know that girl because he falling in love with her. The girl is so cute, kind and friendly.

        One day, Boboy went go to the English class at the afternoon. He are lazy boy but he kind and loving. Boboy just go to the English class because he don't want he mother disappointed to him. He not in mood go to the class. When Boboy arrived at the class, he walked up to the second to entered the classes. He go to the class, he saw a one girl seat at the back of class and he still want to see the girl face because he never had been seen before.

         Boboy just seat to he sit like usually he do everyweek. At the same time, the girl see to him but Boboy suspected something happen. The girl see him for the long time because all student there so naughty and make  a noisy. But, Boboy just silent and he do the work. Just he only one special there that girl see. When finished the class, Boboy are first person go out from the fastly because he still not in mood. He walked down to go home, he uncle pick he up to bring him home. At the same time, Gigurl stand beside the light shop and smile to Boboy. But he don't look to Gigurl. He disappointed to her and Gigurl just say never mind because she understand what i feel. She also had been see him before this when Boboy primary school.

          Boboy family and her family know each other. One night, Gigurl say hello to me at the Tagged when i online at the midnight. She ask him, he still want to go the English class. Boboy said to her maybe he want to go to continued he study. Gigurl request to Boboy to hang out with her tomorrow and he was panic at the same time because he first time going out with a girl only without some else. So, Boboy going out tomorrow with her. He late the first date with her, but Gigurl waiting untill he come.

           When arrived Boboy at the place where they promise to meet, two couples panic and shamed. They walked together to the another place to get lunch together. First day, Boboy was spent her lunch and she was happy because they had lunch together for their first time. After that, they going to see her favourite movie. The favourite movie is Twilight. That time, she was spent all tickets movie and the foods. They see the movie together. When movie started, Boboy so noise because he always asked her about that movie. After finished the movie, they going to another place. They just have fun and spent time together before their go home. When Gigurl want to go home, Boboy hold her hand for the long time and while see her eyes. She was shamed because he hold her hand for the long time. When arrived at home, at the night Gigurl brought Boboy go to buy her mobile phone credits. They walked go to the shop near their house. They spend their time together again at the night walking in rain. The first time Boboy hold the Gigurl hand while they walked to go home. That is sweetest memories they had been and never their forget. The two couples promise to get married. After 10 years, they get married and had a happy family.